Name : Niken Vincensia Nesha
Nim :
1212021193
Class : 3F
Topic: Skin Dream Beauty
Balm (BB) cream
ü disguise blemishes and imperfections
ü disguise the appearance of pores and redness of the skin
ü face looks radiant
ü moist day with no shiny result
ü spf 30
*this is my paragraph*
Make up
products with skin care benefits of all the faces you need and want in a beauty
cream. One product that combine make up, skin care, sunscreen tan. Help disguise
blemishes and pores appear. Help moisturize and make the face look radiant. Suitable
for sensitive skin and is non comedogenis. Does not clog pores and oil free.
Dear Nien,
BalasHapusYou are supposed to write a descriptive paragraph. You know what a descriptive paragraph is, right? Your paragraph above is more like an advertisement of a cosmetic product.
In your paragraph, you write many sentences that have not subject. Pay attention on the brackets below.
Make up products with skin care benefit[s] of all the faces you need and want in a beauty cream. [subject???] [is] one product that combine make up, skin care, sunscreen tan. [WHAT???] Help disguise blemishes and pores appear. [WHAT???] Help moisturize and make the face look radiant. [WHAT???] Suitable for sensitive skin and is non comedogenis. [WHAT???] Does not clog pores and oil free.